It's just about...

still World Poetry Day and I thought I'd share with you the poem I got from Bel for Mother's Day:

My mum is a ...

as quick as a car,
a luxury caribbean holiday,
a comic strip in the news,
a delciate flamingo,
a speedy runner,
a soft candy floss,
a staplers she holds things together,
an amusing comedy,
a creative artist,
pretty like a violet in the spring

Not bad for an 8 year old. Though am worried about some of her similies!

BNM

Comments

  1. I think it's excellent! And I'm only commenting now as it came up on FB today as one of my memories... or rather, the link did. Especially love "a delicate flamingo" - wonderful word-play. Hope she's still writing!!

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    1. Would you believe that they are now 19 and in uni!.. Commented over on your blog -weird how memories make you smile!
      I'm back blogging apparently

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